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Gopal
Kumar Yadav aka Gopi has got an envious potbelly. And he didn’t grow it
overnight. In fact he has achieved it. Fifteen years of monotonous work has
earned him a made to order wife from some village of Bihar, a ten year old DPS
kid and a 2 BHK flat at Maharani Bagh of New Delhi.
Today
he is going to fulfill his long protected dream. He is going to own a 1 BHK
flat at New Friends Colony. NFC is not more than 15 minutes of walk from
Maharani Bagh. But it took him 15 years to reach there.
“Good
Morning Sir. You must be Mr. Yadav? I am Kamal Kumar.” A gentleman in shiny
brown leather shoes greeted him. By looking at his tie and shoes, anyone could
tell that he was some kind of salesman.
“Good
Morning. This place…” The place seemed vaguely familiar to Gopi. It was for
sure that he has not visited that compound ever. But there was something
familiar about the compound, the streets, the buildings and even the parking.
“Not
to worry about the place sir jee. We are giving you the best deal sir jee. Mata Ka Mandir is just five minutes of
walk from here. Community Centre is hardly 10 minutes of walk from here. ” He
could have continued to measure the distances in units of minutes, had Gopi not
interrupted him.
“When
was this apartment built?”
“Some
10 years ago sir jee. I am in this business for 15 years now.”
“There’s
lift, this way?”
“Yes!
Have you been here before sir jee?”
“No.
Never”
More than Kamal, he himself was surprised by his own knowledge and
memory, which seemed to defy his senses. How could he know such details about a
place, he has never been to. He tried to recollect all the memory that lay
dormant in some part of his skull. Any relative living in this colony was out
of question. Moreover, none of his relatives were rich enough to own a flat at
that place. Has he been here in some marriage function of a colleague?
“See.
This is your mansion sir jee. And this is your huge hall…”
“We
have a kitchen this side. And a balcony to the left…”
“Sir
jee, you have come here before. Now I am sure.”
“No.
I haven’t. Even I am surprised. May be my past life connection.”
“Sir
jee. This is your bedroom. And the kitchen is to that side.”
“There
must be a shaft besides the kitchen.”
“Yes
sir jee.”
“Oh!
This beam. This is the beam. How is this behaving in shear?”
“What?
Sir jee” Kamal was puzzled to hell.
Now Gopi remembered everything, every minute detail of the building. Every beam, every slab panel, every column and every foundation below the columns; including that erratic beam which simply would not pass in shear…this was the building he had designed…some 11 years ago.
Danish..It was awsome..nice narration..amazing grip..short but crisp..One of the few short stories that made me smile..This is what you are..always remember this..with mediocrity you can please and lead thousands of them but then they would be mediocre admirers..well done and hope many more would come soon...keep it up !!!!!!
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